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Naughty Little Rose

I stopped to smell the roses
and a thorn stabbed me in the nose
Then an angry bee  flew up my shorts
And left me dancin on my toes
I started running for my doorstep
Sting ointment was my desparate need
But i tripped going up the steps
And it gave me bloody knees
My nose was bleeding profusely
The bee stinging me you know where
I was screaming like a wild banshee
Who was caught up in a snare
I went through the door in a mad frenzy
My wife saw my wild-eyed stare
She heard my screams of agony
Then she laughed like she didnt care
I bolted for the bathroom
I spread the ointment tween my thighs
I showered the blood off my knees and nose
Then i slipped and blackened both my eyes.
Theres a moral to my story
A life lesson very true,
When you stop to smell the roses
Maybe the roses are smelling you.

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  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:05:00 PM
    Hello Carl, you send a very good message here... , Congratulations on your win ~xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 10:55:00 PM
    Wow u placed 1st in d contest! Dis sure is a scintillating poem! Many congrats carl!

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 6:07:00 PM
    This write of your made me laugh out loud, and being true makes it twice as funny. Sorry for the pain you endured but it paid off by winning a 1st place win. Tell me Carl do you still smell roses? Awesome write and win! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 8:06:00 AM
    congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 8:39:00 PM
    This is my No.1. The theme of the contest was "Lessons in life are funny". I think your poem is very funny and there is lesson or moral to it which you spell out so it satisfies both requirements very well. I have viewed the others. Most are funny but I am left wondering what is the lesson in them. Congratulations!

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser
    Date: 11/16/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thankyou John, i appreciate it, Carl
  1. Date: 11/15/2013 6:36:00 PM
    Oh my. I'm going to more careful in my garden. Great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 2:46:00 PM
    Crazy, Carl. Creative and entertaining. Congrats!

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 6:55:00 AM
    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 4:37:00 AM
    - Congrats on your fine win, Carl. - Have a great weekend.- oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Carl

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 11:53:00 PM
    this is FANTASTIC. BIG congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 10:14:00 PM
    Hahaha. Quite an ordeal you've described here. Humor poetry does it for me and this is it. Nice one, Carl. Licia :-)

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser
    Date: 11/12/2013 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks licia, never did catch the bee, thanks for droppin by,Carl
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 5:38:00 PM
    Sounds like a rough day. Thanks for the laugh, sorry to laugh at your pain. They do say laughter is the best medicine but that probably won't help your tender bits.

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser
    Date: 11/10/2013 5:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    NP Richard, i laugh at myself all the time, thanks for reading my friend, Carl
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 4:24:00 PM
    what a humorous write, this one was fun to read, though I am sure a bee sting in certain places aren't as much fun...nicely penned :)

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser
    Date: 11/10/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind comments Sandra, was just in one of those whimsical moods
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 3:18:00 PM
    - Carl, really nice to read. - That who is also a pleasure ..... that you take the time to smell the roses ... a bee sting.. survive most people :))) - A beautiful poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser
    Date: 11/10/2013 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Anne for taking time to read. Always nice to hear from you. Hope your week end is going well. Blessings Carl