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Nature's Superdome

There is no thing I have seen like the Florida sky, Mushroom towers build on bulging dark pillows, when storm clouds tumble o’er birds on the fly. Haphazardly honed and shaped by front’s bellows. Nature daily debuted for my beauty hungry eye. written 7/10/11 (In Florida, a short afternoon thunderstorm in the heat of the day during Summer months is almost a daily occurrence.)

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Date: 7/13/2011 10:22:00 AM
I agree - nature can be the most awesome and inspiring of all things, including music and the arts. LOve, daver
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Date: 7/12/2011 4:15:00 AM
Vividly, and poetically depicted. Mother nature is powerful and beautiful.
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Date: 7/12/2011 12:27:00 AM
A very descriptive write, to help me picture this Florida phenomena! good one, Robert.
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Date: 7/11/2011 6:41:00 PM
I remember those thunder storms. I was raised in Florida. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:47:00 AM
you wrote this like i felt i was there, and could hear the thunder above my head as i ran for cover. enjoyed it very much.
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Date: 7/11/2011 5:47:00 AM
This reminds of the Northern Cape one of SA's provinces. Where it can be sunny the one moment and the next you can be soaking wet and just as easily the sun would dry your clothes again.. Enjoyed this beauty Bob.. Hope your weekend's been good :) lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/10/2011 11:47:00 AM
We have been having Florida like downpours here in Colorado. I like the bird piece. Florida rains are tremendous. Nice write
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Date: 7/10/2011 10:35:00 AM
Beautiful description of those thunderstorms Robert...liked it.
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