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Nature's Perfect Shake

Frosty, white, foaming
Rock and branch for stirring sticks
Nature’s perfect shake

Entry for Raul Moreno's Contest

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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:51:00 PM
    Love the image. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 8:49:00 AM
    I can picture a kid playing with melted ice. Stirring it like a shake. P.d.

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 12:13:00 PM
    Congratulations Shawn, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 1:51:00 PM
    Loved thad middle line and congrats for being in the winners' circle. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 10:03:00 AM
    A nice Honor mentioned, Shawn. Congratulations, AGape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 9:55:00 AM
    Shawn, Yes! This is wonderful. I truly enjoyed it. Congrats, Tom

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 7:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 9:50:00 PM
    So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 5:26:00 PM
    I really like yoiur imaginative Haiku, Shawn. congratulations

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 2:28:00 PM
    Great adjectives in this haiku, Shawn!! Congratulations on your success in Raul's Contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 12:34:00 PM
    Shawn, Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 12:33:00 PM
    My congratulations on your win in the contest, Shawn!! Enjoy! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 11:35:00 AM
    Shawn, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 9:01:00 AM
    What a delightful Haiku. Congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 5:50:00 AM
    Congrats Shawn on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy with your beautiful Haiku.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 3:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Shawn. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 1:46:00 AM
    Shawn, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 8:37:00 AM
    good one!

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 6:36:00 PM
    I thought you were talking aout the quake.

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 1:03:00 PM
    Delightful haiku, Shawn! Can I have a sip? Nothing could be more satisfying than such a "perfect shake" from nature. Love, Carolyn