Nature Sounds

The wind against the trees make a rustling A sound unlike any other around The rubbing of the limbs craft a bustling It’s a subtle music which brings this sound Even the lake near land has a ripple The wind against the trees make a rustling And the grass nearby swishes and baffles And the wind seems to give a great panting The water has another sound, bubbling Sounds permeate all throughout this calm place The wind against the trees make a rustling Mountain sits mighty with sounds on its face Even the light seems to speak of high marks The scene enlightens higher than heartstrings Sound is the number one part that embarks The wind against the trees make a rustling…
Russell Sivey Contest: 'SOUNDS' Sponsor: FRANK H. 5/11/2013
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Date: 5/15/2013 8:28:00 AM
I love the sounds of natures in your poem my dear friend! I'm loving and enjoying this one too! An outstanding quatern indeed. Thank you and thank you so much! Good luck and best wishes! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/14/2013 5:56:00 AM
You captured some great sounds of nature in your poem, Russell. Good luck in Frank's contest.
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Date: 5/14/2013 3:15:00 AM
Wow! What's more Russell. You've done justice to the contest and nothing but winning is what you deserve. Bravo one of my favorites!
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Date: 5/12/2013 9:40:00 AM
awesome write here, Russell
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Date: 5/11/2013 9:09:00 PM
A lot of lovely sounds Russell...good luck!
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Date: 5/11/2013 5:57:00 PM
I am sure this gem will do very well Russell.
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Date: 5/11/2013 4:30:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for your visits..Cowbirds were not in our area but something happened and they came in here..They can just take over an area if they can trick enough birds to rear their young..Of course, if they were too successful then all the other birds would be gone and they would no longer have anyone to do their work...Sara
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Date: 5/11/2013 3:11:00 PM
love this, my friend - a sure winner
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Date: 5/11/2013 10:26:00 AM
I like the sound of the poem, and the embarks around. mountains carrying it's won sound reminds me a part in the Lord of the ring movies. Russell, thank you for all the nice and lovely visits in the past. After seeing and hearing the things that go on in this world, gives me reason to pray and never take my true poet friends for granted. Enjoy the greatest people and things in life. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *LINDA
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