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Naked Trees Shiver

silver sky exhales 

           showers forests with ice dust....

                   naked trees shiver



(4th in Contest Strict Haiku 2 by Charles Henderson)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:51:00 PM

Eamon,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/7/2011 4:58:00 AM

Congratulations Eamon on your high placement. Great credit due for this one - creates a magnificent scene, wish you could take a picture of it. Regards, Déirdre

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/5/2011 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations. No wonder your entry was chosen in the contest.

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/4/2011 8:05:00 PM

beautiful imagery, congrats on your win in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 6:03:00 PM

Awesome win, Eamon!

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/4/2011 4:36:00 PM

Eamon, Congratulations, you won also, this is a beauty, I love the images in this, silver sky exhaling, I can see the sky with lips blowing and then the forests filled with showers if sleet/snow and the bare trees so cold, shivering, that is just beautiful. What inspiration do you need, this is just magic man.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/4/2011 4:34:00 PM

Con gratulations on the fourth place win in ther contest of Charles, Eamon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/4/2011 3:50:00 PM

Congrats Eamon on your wonderful winning poem in the Haiku contest so lovely your words are.. appreciate your special comments on my poetry always and enjoy your top ten victory once again my friend with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/4/2011 2:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2011 11:58:00 AM

sure ball win, eamon!.. congrats! :) nette

John Freeman

Date: 1/4/2011 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations Eamon on your worthy poem's honorable win. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/4/2011 8:36:00 AM

Brilliant image, Eamon. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/4/2011 8:07:00 AM

Ohhh love this one! You are fast becoming a new favorite of mine! Congrad's on this chilly win!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/4/2011 7:54:00 AM

brrrrr.......this also makes me shiver....excellent!! Love this! Carrie

Kash Poet

Date: 1/4/2011 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations Eamon on your well deserved win!-kashinath

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/4/2011 6:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in my contest. I really enjoyed the shivering trees. Charles

Deb Radke

Date: 1/4/2011 6:10:00 AM

Hey!!! Congratulations! I just saw you captured a win for this wonderful haiku. Very good Eamon.

Deb Radke

Date: 1/4/2011 4:49:00 AM

I love this... Simply love it. I see it, feel it and can almost touch it. Well done, Eamon. Very well done. Into my favorites this goes! ps. Thank you for reading, and liking, my work. I so appreciate, so very much, your comments. You are a wonderful write, and I thank you for taking time to write your thoughts of my work. Deb

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/3/2011 12:20:00 PM

Nice one Eamon, I have entered the competition too, I think it will be a big contest, everyone seems to be into haiku here. How are you doing? The w4all site is down, so happy to have this one. Maire

Kash Poet

Date: 1/3/2011 6:50:00 AM

Wonderful haiku Eamon.A great entry tn the contest.

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/3/2011 4:56:00 AM

Wonderfully description of a frosty forest here Eamon. Déirdre

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/3/2011 4:52:00 AM

What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry eamon. Love, Carol

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 1/2/2011 7:49:00 PM

so creative Eamon! You'll do great in the contest I'm sure... Lay

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/2/2011 5:42:00 PM

Nice pen picture you have worded of the naked trees in this wonderful haiku, Eamon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/2/2011 3:32:00 PM

Pretty portrait in words Eamon.. luv the way u presented it and know Chaz will luv it too..good luck my friend and thankxx for your encouraging words on my entry for Deb's contest... it took almost a month to get it out but finally ..finished product appeared ... much success with your imagery filled Haiku..with luv..

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