N of Emerging Night

I am the N of emerging night with jewels for the dance of soul, in darkness are freckles of light to hold a prayer, to wake the fire, as net on clouds imbue what’s brave when all but silence rakes the sky and in this space, the truth so intense stirring the heart without defense. But somehow, twilight breaks into dawn spilling new dewdrops to taste fresh mist of hope, rising and billowing sinless as white stars of hours before blessing courage of N’s emerging night. © by nette onclaud for Nancy Jones’ Alphabet Soup
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/7/2012 6:29:00 PM
Winner for sure..Very creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Soup mail...Sara
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Date: 6/29/2012 12:47:00 PM
Nette, belated congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/26/2012 6:42:00 PM
NNN...Nette.... neetee... i love your emerging win..always..pd
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Date: 6/25/2012 1:56:00 PM
How beautiful....fits you just perfectly, Nette...a lovely poem this is!
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:40:00 AM
Hey Nette, thsi is amazing poetry from you.Congrats on your win.Where are you?
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Date: 6/24/2012 9:23:00 AM
N ice......;) congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/24/2012 8:22:00 AM
Splendid!Wonderful piece,Nette..Great write..Congratulations on your win...Keep on flying,my friend...
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Date: 6/23/2012 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nancy's "Alphabet Soup" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2012 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your Notable win.
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:23:00 PM
What can I say, sistah? You blow me away and I'm just SO HAPPY to have crossed paths with you in this lifetime... from one N to another, namaste <3
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on another splendid win nette
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Date: 6/11/2012 2:09:00 PM
I think 'N' was a good choice... couldn't have done better... in fact, couldn't have done as well... In any case good luck... ;-) Terry (and also thanks for your kind comments...)
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Date: 6/11/2012 1:42:00 PM
Great letter that you have chosen for your soup..That N will float on to the top for sure..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting about my work..Good luck in Nancy's contest..Sara
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:50:00 AM
Wow, i love the title and the insight of this poem, Nette. I also love how you pu 'as net on clouds' your name :)
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:12:00 AM
Wow, what a powerful write my friend! I love how you integrated the N into the poem! My favorite line has to be the, "spilling new dewdrops to taste" it says so much and I love the meaning behind it! You've done wonderful to the incredible, spectacular write Nette, or should I say N! The very epiphany of the poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 4:26:00 AM
Just beautiful Nette, love it. - Have a lovely day. - oxox hugggs Anne-Lise
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