Mystical Place

There are many mystacal places to visit,
with shining delights, they do inquisate,
stars,and magical wizards,,as you walk in the door,
to this magical place, a scent of jasmine hits your face,
and many scents that I adore,
faces from far away lands, passing through your hands,
pictures of ghosts and witches, there is somthing in all these nitches,
rocks of so many colors, set up to make to make you smile,
while you are in this store, you can spend a long while,
palm readers to one side, fortune tellers to the other,
while thru this magical store you glide, for it is like no other,
a short time to let your mind go free,
and offer you some sanqtity,
a place where you can be at peace,
and enjoy a piece of serenity,
if only for a short time, your mind can be sublime.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/24/2010 3:10:00 PM
May your week be one of good health, may your heart be full of love, and your life give you amazing inspiration for your writing. I enjoyed reading your exceptional poetry this beautiful Sunday afternoon and thank you for sharing it Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2010 11:46:00 AM
Hi Susan This is a fantastic magical place .Is it real or from your mind?You have described it so well I am transported along with you.I can smell the jasmine which is a truly beautiful fragrance.I am also aware how much we need to find that peace within.I like this, thank you for sharing it. Love June(Sylvia)
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