My Wosrt Endeavour

You know there was once this girl called heather
Someone that I met back in nineteen ninety three
The only thing I wished is that we'd got it together
I would always be thinking about us two her and me                            

I thought that we'd become these birds of a feather
Though I was seventeen, she'd just turned twenty
But suppose then I was not one for being so clever                    
As I was so lost and still trying to find my own identity                                                      

Which quite often had one at the end of there tether
But I guess that was due to what I felt, the uncertainty
Someone once said that you should never say never
I wondered is there a thing as love, passion, sensuality.

Then you know with her felt changeable, like the weather
But then though within myself was a feeling of insecurity
It was one of those time's that was my worst endeavour
And boy I'd say since then, I do now think a lot differently



There was a gilr called heather but this was based lousy
on another girl calledcorrein at time between 1993 and 1997
this was on soup just rewrote in better context this kind of
follows on to DASJAVU, FATE,  ENDURE,  LOVE IS RARE
Still mentoing the girl but also how I felt at those times myself
written originly between 2000,2003  UPDATED 2012

note again this has had verses taken out I fekt to much
 kept back as was just chenged few lines around
or though not good just a little work in progress at time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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