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my very being

your voice...sends chills to my very being.
your touch....tingles and warms my heart.
your presents...fills me with hope.
your wonderfuly mezmerizing.

as a mirror has two does love confuse me...
are you here to hurt me.. or are you here to save me?

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  1. Date: 12/25/2011 10:03:00 PM
    You need to elaborate more on your poem. Enjoyed the beginning, but the last two lines, you can express example: as a mirror owns two signs, so does this love confuse me, are you hear to hurt me, or are you hear to save me? It will address your feelings towards him. Hope it helps, love, vie ps. Just continue to write, let your heart flow dear one.