My Valentine

silence among the stars
kissed my valentine
an endless secret

a secret of a genuineness
affection 
purer than a pearl
love
more delicate than a silk
sincerity
softer than a dew

no word
no one
could fathom the depth of love

only through 
nocturnal sweet fragrance heart
with the glorious nostagia soul
will sing a lovely ballad 
and breeze the lovely aroma
with its blossom

i often lend my ears 
to the fullest moon
wished it could whisper 
the softest love

i often lend my heart
to the music calling
wished it could take me 
to the passionate love

O my Valentine
wished you take me
to my gorgeous piece of love
and let me
live in its timeless tune

~sukmawati komala~
7 february 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/9/2013 10:52:00 PM
Dear Sukmawati, YOUR "Kimba" must be an amazing man for YOU to pen such Passionate POETRY.I Thank-YOU for sharing that Passion with the SOUP. YOU are an Amazing Addition to the Soup Family.Superb Quill. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 2/20/2013 1:01:00 AM
Passion-filled and lovely write, my dear friend, thnx for your visit!! Jag
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Date: 2/17/2013 12:02:00 AM
this is just so sweet SK ;} you have a beautiful day ;}
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:37:00 PM
Ahh yes, SK...I can feel the warmth and love you have for your soul-mate in this soothing yet passionate write...as I said before, he's a lucky guy!...Have a wonderful evening dear friend - Tim
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Date: 2/14/2013 7:38:00 AM
Hello my dear poet friend, SK! This is a very beautiful and lovely masterpiece of yours. I love it so much! Thank you for sharing. By the way, would you mind if I ask you where are your other poems? You really write so well. I love your poems. Well, anyway I'm stopping by to especially greet you a very Happy Valentines Day! I wish you all the best on this special Heart's Day and always! I hope you're always doing great! Sending you my big sweetest hugs ! love always, Leonora
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Date: 2/14/2013 6:15:00 AM
Very passionate Valentine poem..Enjoyed reading this morn..My this be a great Valentine Day for you..Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2013 11:30:00 PM
Such a beautiful and passionate poem..In your words...The silk,the dew,the fragrance...The whole thing! :o) Just beautiful!~<3 Happy Valentines Day!~<3
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:25:00 PM
Ohh, so cute and lovely, Sukmawati. Happy Valentine's to you too :). Love ya, Toquyen
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:01:00 PM
Lovely Valentine's poem! You really spread some beauties of love in this special day :D, happy Valentine's day too dear Sukmawati, thank you for your lovely visit today :D it's been a pleasure - hug, yanny
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Date: 2/13/2013 5:37:00 PM
Wonderful valentine Poem expressed very sweetly. Thanks a lot for wishing me. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/11/2013 8:02:00 AM
Song of Love...
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Date: 2/10/2013 11:35:00 PM
what a gorgeous valentine, sweetie. You always have such passion in your writing.
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