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My Unease

unease unfamiliar disruptive crowded rooms apprehension of the unknown heightened awareness, chest tight, heart pounding quick shallow breaths, muscles flexing nerves alert, thoughts racing change of routine unease TLH © 07-01-2012

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Robert Pettit

Date: 7/3/2012 9:46:00 PM

A great rictameter description of extreme stress.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2012 8:51:00 PM

You described the feeling very well. it can be all of that and more!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/2/2012 11:43:00 AM

Wow, I too felt the unease flowing through your awesome write! It beats with every heartbeat, tightening the chest, creating a great feel of unease! What an outstanding and tremendous poem my friend! Great work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/2/2012 11:04:00 AM

Rictameter.....never read it before - well done Tanya! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2012 10:52:00 AM

i can feel the unease racing through your lines, tanya... well formed piece with such gripping mood!... yes! :) huggs!