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In this life when you have something great you must cherish it because when you loss it 99% of the times you does regret it so why neglect it love is hard to find an when you do its like are perfect design straight from mankind,

Close your eyes now open them turn around an look behind what do you see babe is only me are you crazy what are you doing to me are you seeing me or are you seeing through me i guess may be you are is your mind far while i am wishing upon a star wondering where you are,

I am crying my soul is dying while i am trying to hold on i am trying to be strong because babe i dont got much long i need to know where did our love go you are moving slow hold me tight please an dont let go,
I am begging pleading my soul is grieving honey i really think soon ill be leaving why you dont want me to okay ill stay an i just may give you the time of day but here you go again lying an pretend i taught you were my freind till the end an my love to you i have send you hurt me so babe now i must let go you know i choose you as the one to be my shining sun now look at what you done.

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:07:00 PM
    Florence :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:27:00 PM