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My Tree

My Tree       

                                           Tree!
                               The tree of evergreen
                            Leaves are green to thee
                         Birds sing from some boughs
                    Flowers bloom forth in swirl patterns
                      And bees buzz musically round
                         I look upon thee – swaying
                                 By the drifting wind
                                       I love thee–
                                         towering
                                        That Looks
                                         upward
                                       and Beyond–
                                       the symbol
                                       of renewal

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Ashley Plotczyk

Date: 6/6/2012 3:46:00 PM

Very nice image built with a very good write

Regina Asinde

Date: 6/6/2012 11:43:00 AM

Hi Tashi, I love your poem...especially its structure..it shows exactly what you are speaking about..congs on getting it featured! Regina

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2012 8:44:00 PM

TASCHI ,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great night ;-) always ~PD ***

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2012 4:26:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tashi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol