My Thought

I wish I could just give up; give in;
Continue no more and just cave in
To where the pieces of me, which use to be,
Are taken by the hole in my heart. which is me.
In a world of love, pain, and discord
Where the circle of life circles my life
To show me tomorrow is never secured
So I will rise from the ashes to spread my phoenix wings
And be the light on to this world.
Replacing the occupation of the sun,
Revealing what lies ahead
But shadowing what was left behind
There for seek opportunity,
and if it knocks, then all the more better
So welcome your odds with open arms.
Leap with broken legs
In faith your outcome isn't always the same,
Because then that's just insanity..
heh and it doesn't take Enstine to figure that out.
It take takes a man of strength.
Some one not scared to push life to its limit
And give the devil a run for his money.
I want to be that man
Built in a foundation of love
That I may stand tall and tower above...
the friction between our affliction's an life's natural motion
The commotion eroding away our emotions
Stripping away our free will and pride
like paint chips on old stickers peeled off too many times
I want to be the solider he's called me to be
A man that's so willing to express his Christianity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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