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My Soul For You 'My Heart For You 2'

(11/11/2011) Here is my soul saved from treachery’s tip Caress it with your touch, shield it from the weep Inside your soul, please plant it deep Seal it from every soulless creep No need to check or even peep You'll know if it's ripe and ready to reap For its sweet to your veins will sip That’ll be time, your heart to swim in my warmth dip Thanx Susan Burch :)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2013 8:39:00 PM

Dinda, Congratulations with your "Any Poem Goes" in my contest. It was an honor in hosting this contest once again. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Goodnight*Always*LINDA

M.I.A .

Date: 12/12/2011 9:19:00 PM

I read this and the other part before but don't have the chance to comment it. But it's a very wonderful poems, Dinda! the promises lies within the before and beyond! I shall treasure it. thank you for your sweet comments, I hope you'll have a great holiday!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/15/2011 8:05:00 AM

wow. such a big change from the first one! i have to say that I think this one is much better - better flow and I like how it's more romantic. It even has a caressing tone to it too. very pretty. (no thanx needed. it was in you all along :) )

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/12/2011 5:20:00 AM

* “Speechless * Breathless * Spellbinding * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Dinda * It Seems As Though Every Beautiful Line * Reaches Deep, Deeep Inside * I Absolutely LOve This Beautiful Treasures Ending * My Soulful Ripeness * Like Sweet Wine * Passion Permeates This Beauty In Faves * Thank You * For Your Kind Lovely Visit * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *