My Soul Appoints Positive Points

Peace if you want to get
Best way is to fully forget

Love if you want to show
From your eyes let it flow

If comes in your mind anger
How can you grow stronger?

If hatred is your companion
You are bad in God's opinion

If smiling is not by you done
Your heart will carry burden

If with mercy you move not
Your joy will be a big naught

If you employ not courage
Loss will come to discourage

Always if you do lazy sleeping
Results make you do weeping

Harsh words if you use
God makes you only lose

Bad language of yours
Will cancel your cheers

If you have no tolerance
It reveals your ignorance

If doubting you wrongly make
It will cause permanent ache

If fighting is your habit
Around you losses orbit

When sadly time you spend
Your agonies have no end

If hoping is not by you made
How can you win my comrade?

If you fear and retreat from a task
Help from God, how can you ask?

If you do a very bad deed
Penalty comes with speed

If God Himself you cannot trust
Then for you none will be honest

If faith in God is by you held
Anything tough can be felled

Affection heals mind's infection
It is for soul a strong protection

If you open to all your heart
In bliss you will be never short

I have given you my ideas
To help you in life-test pass.

mvvenkataraman

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/24/2012 7:39:00 PM
Great testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara
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Date: 8/14/2011 6:23:00 PM
Hi again my friend, your verse is filled with an important message and great wisdom. Something we all can consider.
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