My Song If You Can Hear the Voices of Stars

NOTE: I had submitted the text of this song If you can hear  
in the Song of the Year contest in June 2011. 
It has been given a special honorable mention as per the 
webpage Awarded to me

FOR MORE INFORMATION PLEASE SEE MY BLOG OF 29th JULY 11.
http://www.songoftheyear.com/2011results/ravindrakapoor.html

"The Song of the Year songwriting contest has awarded 
Ravindra K. Kapoor the Honorable Mention placement in 
the song contest. Song of the Year receives entries from 
all over the world and only the top songwriters receive 
a Honorable Mention placement in the songwriting 
competition". 

IF YOU CAN HEAR 

If you can hear,                             the Voices of Stars,
You can know,                       the longings of my heart,

If you can know,                       why they blink and call,
You can know,                         the feelings of my heart,

If you can hear,	                       the singing of Stars,
You can feel,                                 the love of my heart,

If you can see,	                          their tears and smiles,
You can hear,	                           the cries of my heart,

If you can feel,		                 the love of their songs,
You can hear 		                 the voices of my heart,

If you can feel, 	                            their joys and pains,
You can surely, 		                              win my heart,

If you can feel,	                         the joys of their songs,
Just come My Love and              take me    in your arms.  

Lyrical notes by 
Ravindra K  Kapoor
Kanpur India June 2011
 
NOTE:
DUE TO SOME ON GOING EYE PROBLEM I AM NOT READING 
AND WRITING MUCH. SORRY IF YOU DO NOT FIND ME READING 
MORE OF YOUR WONDERFUL POEMS FOR SOME MORE TIME.
Ravindra
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/26/2011 6:37:00 PM
Ravindra, I'm very fascinated with the invitation.. I can feel my heart dancing in a fancy way after reading your song. I will research the website noted on the top.. I have had a tough year this year.. I'm glad for your poetry friendship always,.. Thank you for stopping by my work... I' actually took the day off from my Stinky restaurant... Have a nice one..looking forward to ringing in the new year here on the soup... God Bless,..p.d.
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Date: 9/22/2011 8:34:00 AM
I love the repetition in this verse. It emphasises all you are saying with an intensity that captures the mind. So glad I found you.
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:28:00 PM
grat write ...really enjoyed it....
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Date: 8/16/2011 7:55:00 PM
Again, congratulations on your win with this poem. I look forward to reading a new poem from you. Hope things are going well for you. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 8/15/2011 7:24:00 AM
such a truthful song Ravindra...thanks for sharing....smiles...chiquita
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Date: 8/8/2011 12:02:00 AM
Ravindra - so happy for you on your coveted feat on song of the year contest. Writing song is a little different skill than poetry writing. Thanks for your comments on my work Dad Son Dad.... I couldn't agree less that love that one showers on Parents is the kind of treatment he can expect from his sons ...it's karma's cycle.....Heart pains when Parents who have done your diapers are sent to Old Age home ..... Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:02:00 AM
So much truth flows through your song. Congratulations on your honor in the contest. I am happy for you. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Hopefully, your eye problem will get better. Karen
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Date: 8/2/2011 12:49:00 AM
Congratulations to you What a proud honor, Ravindra and this feels to me like it would be a very lyrical song. Lots of nice repetitive lines which many songs have. So sorry to hear of your eyes . I have another friend in that situation. Lucky for me, having a bad shoulder does not prevent my typing at a keyboard! HOpe you get better soon. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:29:00 PM
Its simply lyricism raining from heaven, Ravindra
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Ravindra for you thoughtful comment. This is a beautiful song as is obvious by the honor given it. It reveals a sensitive and caring heart. Lovely. I certainly hope your eye problems are resolved soon. God bless you. -Robert
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:51:00 AM
so simple yet enriching; it's how you used each word to make it so meaningful and enriching... cheers to you, rav! hope this can be recorded soon! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/30/2011 6:41:00 PM
Ravindra many congrats on your success with this dynamic delight in poetry my friend.. lovely words of expressive poetic art .. the song is lovely as your vibrant words my friend ... so happy u shared with us all...much more success always luv..
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Date: 7/30/2011 3:11:00 PM
Dear friend, I can see why this poem was selected a a winner for the song contest. It flows so gently and touches the reader heart. Congratulations on your success, Ravindra. Love your poem and you as well, Carolyn
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Date: 7/30/2011 2:37:00 PM
I have placed a Blog about this Song, which was submitted to Song of the Year contest of USA. It may take some time but I would make a Video of this Song, as soon as it would be possible. Hope all my PS friends would like it although at present it is without its voice and music. ....Love and best wishes...Ravindra
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