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My Puddle

"Tears I shed, were once rain drops...."

Then the clouds opened and cried for me. So I could be a child within the puddles ~ So that my heart, bore less the burden of my life. In happy abandon, fully immerse myself in the joy that is the splash. ~ I thought not of tomorrow, nor of even an hour from then. I was in and of the moment. I was free. ~ As for the tears the clouds had shed? They once more became peaceful rain.
Paula Swanson For the contest; "A Poem Please" Sponsored by Constance La France Placement: 2nd

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  1. Date: 9/3/2011 3:47:00 AM
    A Second Place Win Congratulations. CR

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 8:01:00 AM
    Well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 9:09:00 PM
    Paula, Love the rain poems...must release this one again in March. Congrats to you, dear poet. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 6:02:00 PM
    Lovely poem!!!!CCONGRATULATIONS on your win!!!!!---Lori

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 4:18:00 PM
    Congrats Paula on your super second place win with magnificent poetry my friend..oh how I just luv this piece luv..

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 1:50:00 PM
    Congratulations Paula, on your win with this beauty ;-) luv Wilma

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 1:36:00 PM
    deep and lovely as you, paula..congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 11:39:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Paula. Beautiful piece. Nice going. luv Ralph

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 11:16:00 AM
    A beautiful write Paula. Congrats on your win. Best wishes Em :)

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 10:58:00 AM
    hey Paula, congrats on your win... David

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 10:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Constance's "A Poem Please" contest Paula. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 8:35:00 AM
    So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Paula. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 8:15:00 PM
    Nice work! I enjoyed your poem. The shape makes me think of a raindrop: ) Sorry I haven't been online/commenting, but I've been offline for awhile. Now, dialup internet connection doesn't work as well. I miss all the wonderful writing!

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 6:54:00 PM
    excellent ..full of great imagination Paula and feeling so immense..good luck in the contest ..luv the puddles idea .. great choice ..winner..

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 6:52:00 PM
    Very nice work!! enjoyed tremendously today! you almost have the shape of a tear in the poem. Well done!