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My past time lover

My Past Time Lover
I knew someone close Whenever I thought about her I blushed like a rose I used to see her day and night And when I talked to her My heart felt light She was like an angel to me Whenever she laughed I used to feel the glee I’m not as good as others can be I’m different from them And this is me I’m not like others saying For her I can die But I’d promise That I’ll never make her cry Finally I can make a conclusion For me she is an illusion I haven’t seen her for so long My life, it’s going on n on n on

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  1. Date: 10/11/2011 8:42:00 PM
    Very well written peom. I love the ryhming flow you have to it. It is a heart felt sort of poem and I throughly enjoyed it. Job well done and continue being true to your poetry :) ~love, Brianna p.s. quick note; title is a bit 'akward' relating to the poem, might want to consider tweaking it a bit. and like Rohini said, the second last line should have 'her' instead of 'he'. otherwise i say an A+ peom!

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 3:16:00 PM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Samrat. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 2:04:00 PM
    Excellent expression of love in a very simple manner-- very nice rhyming, but I am not happy with your title---your poem proves that you deeply love her, but how can you say that she is not loving you, although you have not met her for so long.I suggest it should be " My lost love" Please correct the second last line~~~it should be 'her' in place of 'he'.---Rohini