My Painted World

The day goes dark but not black,
With undefined twilight blinking through the night
        the beacons of hope,ambience of peace
       Gloomy hope with cyan coloured mind
              walking on brown sandy beach
     as ripples of love cover the dark blue sea
        Magenta thrush sings beautiful lyrics
            which makes the violet herons
         to hover round the littoral zone
       As I settle on an amber camp bed
       beside my Orange skinned lover
            She was lost in thought
        as the breeze whistles along
Which makes my affection so strong
    I look at her and her scarlet cap
      and feel like giving her a tap
She makes my world go round and round
      In her,plenty pleasures abound
With these feelings I fell into a trance
    Even if I am not full of exuberance
I `ve seen my world surrounded by green fields with purple hibiscus
The white sun shines with great intensity
Which makes the red rose to bloom in the yellow garden of bliss
                This world I float in  is...
more precious and golden to me than pink diamond.



CONTEST:'Paint the World' sponsored by Tracie~indigo Dreamweaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 7/29/2012 5:25:00 PM
Olusegun, A belated congrats on your colorful win! I enjoyed your vivid, passionate twilight! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/27/2012 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Paint The World" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2012 9:21:00 AM
It feels as if I'm in your world, seeing with your eyes the beauty more precious than diamonds! Thank you for that!
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:48:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Olusegun! Nicely done! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/26/2012 2:44:00 PM
Some very good free verse in there perhaps the rhyme is best left out? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/26/2012 9:16:00 AM
congrats Olusegun on a remarkable write and win so colorful luv.. hope u r having a super day..
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:41:00 AM
Olusegun congrats on your win, I like the sound of your world..David
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Date: 7/26/2012 3:17:00 AM
Beautiful Arowolo, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 7/21/2012 10:36:00 AM
what a beautiful piece. Congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 7/18/2012 11:16:00 PM
wow, you painted great artistry! I think you did your very best with this one, my friend.
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Date: 7/17/2012 3:45:00 PM
You are completely ensnared by this beauty and caught up in the emotions of the moment....lovely colors and images in this contest entry...so nice to read this, Olusegun. All is well in my neck of the woods! gwendolen
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