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My Own War Started

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My Own War Started

I want it to stop,
I want it to end,
The wounds you caused,
They will never mend.

What you did,
It wasn't cool,
Why did I trust you?
I was a fool.

And every time
You didn't write,
My own war started,
With yet another fight.

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  1. Date: 2/9/2011 2:45:00 PM
    Simple wording and rhyming, but it delivers clear images into the minds of any reader. It is difficult to find people to trust.