'my Opus'


your voice, my opus 
a voyage undertaken
musical tones


19/05/2011... 13:33

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Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/7/2013 3:00:00 PM

'your voice my opus'. Sooo good, Wilma. Beguilingly complex and wrought with emotion.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/23/2011 6:09:00 AM

Lots of love going on here with this lovely Senryu, Wilma. It is very well done

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 1:20:00 PM

Just wanted to say hope u join in my fun today as it is my birthday and am celebrating via soup for my soup family is as important to me as my personal family and Wilma... lets party..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2011 1:26:00 AM

really nice senryu. Was it for any contest, Wilma?

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 5/20/2011 6:34:00 PM

Wow Girlfriend, you always amaze me XXX Love it

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/20/2011 3:09:00 PM

Beautiful Senryu!!!!! I love it!!!! and you know that already Im sure.... with love MIchael

Kash Poet

Date: 5/19/2011 7:31:00 PM

Wonderful Senryu Wilma.Love it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2011 2:53:00 PM

Beautiful senryu, Wilma. Makes me think of my late husband. He was a revered expert on all types of music and the song of our love still plays in my heart. Much love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/19/2011 2:20:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this expressive work..Voices can evoke emotion for good or bad..Thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind review of my work..Sara

James Foulk

Date: 5/19/2011 11:52:00 AM

very fine piece of poetry, enjoyed it.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/19/2011 11:36:00 AM

was about to sleep already when I read your comment and you got me laughing --haha I think I should be wary before I sing again lol! see even my captcha supports it! says right here, JNX3-- could be jinx times three?? lol-- I would sing to you Somebody, but nahhh, you don't need it anymore, since you already seemed to have found that Somebody?? probably? ooh wee ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 5/21/2011 2:48:00 AM

what?! there's drama already with mr. somebody??? well forgetful me is reminding forgetful you :D ok you want me to sing it now?? haha closet diva here, heehee yeahhh right.

Wilma Neels
Date: 5/19/2011 11:44:00 AM

oh my word will you stop it now already??? You should hear about the drama surrounding that somebody lol will email you and if I forget please remind forgetful me lol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 5/19/2011 11:38:00 AM

& hmm could be that your Opus came from that organ that goes lub dub, lub dub?? ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/19/2011 11:16:00 AM

hmm am I understanding this write? ok I am pleading that I am sleepy as an excuse if I didn't get it-- who you singing a duet with??? ;) hugs to you :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/19/2011 10:37:00 AM

very pleasant and lovely, Wilma

James Fraser

Date: 5/19/2011 6:04:00 AM

This oozes warmth Wilma, nice poem sassy girl. Have a lovely day....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/19/2011 6:03:00 AM

Sorry I changed it Wilma.. a new poet named Sid left a sweet comment right above yours and my mind is going dizzy on this airplane luv.. aiming for home now with a short layover soon.. can u have jet lag in the plane? instead of after the ride is over? sorry luv.. these three lines are so wonderful .. your voice, my opus.. says it all my friend..luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/19/2011 5:39:00 AM

A tribute to your love, right? Lovely and oh so affectionate. Enjoyed. Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2011 4:54:00 AM

ooo! can this be like a god of some sort... or maybe not... a clever senryu,... and for some reason i thought my day meant your night,.. boy am i way off... haha! thats what i get for waking up to early.. And yes nikko is for sure the one who needs to be in la la land right now... Its always nice to see her up when I'm on,,, you take care now,..p.d.

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