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My heart beats faster as she saunters into class, Her moves, classical!, like a spell,I am held bound in a mirage of passion. Gush! what a beauty!, still in wonder land, I heard... 'can you shift a bit?'... I look dazed with mouth open, as I squirm aside for her. *She is my Lavender Rose* CONTEST:"Tanka x2-Pick a Rose from my list" sponsored by Rick Parise.

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Date: 6/17/2013 9:56:00 PM
Many congrats for this beautiful win dear. Sorry for the delay as I was travelling.
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Date: 6/6/2013 8:36:00 PM
Olusegun, a nice little win.... congratulations! *Linda
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:05:00 PM
Excellent write! Congrats on your win in the contest. AO
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:39:00 AM
Congrats Olusegun....Seren
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:21:00 PM
this is SO SWEET and once again, it's a lavender rose!! I think that color and maybe orange were the most popular ones!! Congrats, I am glad I finally got to see your entry.
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Date: 4/22/2013 4:01:00 PM
wow.Olusegun, love the way you express your poem. he he he to the way you are butter by her side... xox..PD
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Date: 4/9/2013 3:40:00 AM
I love the symbolic imagery in this piece. Very nice.
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Date: 4/8/2013 6:26:00 PM
I love that you did this as a symbol for the lavender rose. Nicely done!
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Date: 4/8/2013 1:52:00 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one today..Contest winner in my book..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/8/2013 12:39:00 PM
Simpl ebut lovely. Written with true emotion- -welcome poetrysoup.
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