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My Mortal Wound

Traitor thoughts return again and again to the blackened pool that has become breeding ground for my memories of you. Like fingertips to a deep gash testing for tenderness, waiting for healing, impatiently scratching at scabs and scars. Loosing angry blood from freshly clawed skin; pricking nettles of pain into my defeated heart. Ripe with infection; never to heal you have become ...my mortal wound.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 3/13/2011 1:30:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Kelly. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 3:37:00 PM
Congrats Kelly on being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Kelly. Love, Carol
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