Get Your Premium Membership

My Mind In E Flat

It only takes a note to raise me from my slumber … A tip tappity tap of a beat. Something street, and I’m all ears, hands, but most of all feet … a melody meanders in the back of my mind, a simple, serene rhythm somewhere between love and war is the perfect score, that brings with it harmony.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/3/2011 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest John. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 7/5/2011 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations John, on your poetry being featured this week. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 2/3/2011 10:00:00 PM
THE PERFECT SCORE.. ENJOYED~SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 12:03:00 PM
Very good I love double entrandre, as in "perfect score" Thanks for your kind comment the verse The Sowing, getting #1 was a BIG surprise for me, I'd entered other poets contests and not even got honorable mention, the site doesn't seem to appreciate free verse, nor does it appreciate layered imagery, rhyme's King here [sigh] I will be the Queen of Free Verse??? YES! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 11:22:00 AM
This one is lovely - I wish I had written it - Liz
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 11:11:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry John. It was a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things