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My mind

My mind is a weave of Inspiration

Legally bound by the commitment

To creatively explode

Never before have I looked at yesterday

And thought that today was worth witnessing

Because tomorrow will bring the fruit of it all



My mind is a knot of troubled freedom

Sensitive and waiting to burst open

To enjoy the light

Yet to live and let live

To be or not to be

 Is not a question but a realization



My mind is a tongue tight vision

Waiting for that platform

To raise all hell

Yet to acknowledge

To plant the seed

That will set it free



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  1. Date: 12/10/2011 1:11:00 PM
    efriam my man I have never read something this captivating. love your work

    Efraim Avatar Damona Efraim
    Date: 12/13/2011 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm actually a woman. Thank you though, I appreciate that very much. :-)
  1. Date: 8/2/2011 3:20:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Damona. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

    Efraim Avatar Damona Efraim
    Date: 8/5/2011 3:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow! Thanks you so much!