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My Magic Unicorn

Before I only knew you in our lesson A legendary beauty that I adorn But when I travel to a forested place I saw you looking at me face to face You are standing under a gigantic tree Glistening like crystals around your body An enchanting picture that I want to touch Oh so beautiful and I love you so much! Can I hold you in my arms for a second? And touch your magically pointed horn? It’s a priceless gift I receive on my birthday I am speechless and I don’t know what to say Your horn is a symbol of purity and grace Sprinkle your healing magic that’s my wish To the world of disappointments and emptiness So that we will live a life full of happiness My unicorn, so white under the moonlight Can I ride with you and I will hold you tight If this is a dream I will not open my eyes dear I will savor the moments with you forever Maria Paz Samelo 10/2/2012 This poem is lovingly and heartily dedicated to my friend PD on her special day. You are the person face to face with the magic unicorn in this simple poem of mine. Hope you will like it. May your birthday be a memorable day because we are here for you…Your PS family. Million hugs and kisses from me… Maria *2nd Place *For PD's-Unicorns Contest. *Written by: Maria Paz Samelo * October 02, 2012

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Date: 10/9/2012 10:59:00 PM
awesome poem and awesome win for it. Congrats, my friend.
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Date: 10/6/2012 12:23:00 AM
Many congrats Maria for this wonderful win.
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:52:00 PM
lovely birthday tribute to PD, congrats on your win
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Maria. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 9:07:00 AM
well woven, paz... congrats on your greeat win!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/5/2012 9:07:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem dedicated to the birthday girl PD. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:26:00 AM
Maria. Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~
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Date: 10/3/2012 12:10:00 PM
Excellent poem... beautiful gift/tribute... Terry
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:14:00 PM
thanks for the face to face,, image... xox~pd
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/4/2012 11:14:00 PM
ur welcome friend ..a PD-tastic Birthday to you!! hugs!!
Date: 10/2/2012 9:14:00 PM
Maria, nice nice,,, i love it... thank you very much..... enjoyed stopping by~ ALWAYS~ PD
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Date: 10/2/2012 10:35:00 AM
Wow!!! this is a very fantastic and excellent write for our very dear friend, PD my dear Mary. I love it!! She will love it for sure!!! so sweet!! congratulations!!! love and hugs:) norie
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/2/2012 10:47:00 AM
thanks dear nore..you too have a great poem to her..good luck and God bless you always. mwuah!! (^_^)

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