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My Little Moment

Night even more freezing
It defeats me in my yellow hoody
No stars tonight
It's only me and a bunch of French fries

Low lights in shimmer 
I'm sitting next to the window
At the cafe with a glass of Bintang beer in company
Waiting for the sunrise

On the height of thousands feet from my city
I released all my mind density 
As if the clouds took them away
Vanish along with the fog of those mountains

I wish I could stay
But the sunrise won't wait
And the day will force in
My time is only at dawn when the sun is waking up the day

Then I will gone 

In my little moment at a small cafe in Mount Bromo

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:34:00 PM
    i think we all have our little moments. You have yours in a nice way. In the mist of it all - you shared it with us. Thank you and God bless you... Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 11:08:00 AM
    just love your little moment, in doing so, you are making my little moment too my little moment of joy,

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 12:46:00 AM
    I would eliminate the note, your poem does not require explanation. The poem is strong on it's own and you have created a scene and mood that requires no explanation. Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 10:07:00 AM
    Hey, Yanny, such a pleasant write. I'm so glad I stopped by. :-)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/16/2013 11:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Mike, glad to see you stop by :D I had a pleasant moment too in this :D thank you for visiting my page today and wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 7:26:00 AM
    - I wish I could share this moment with you Yanny. - Lovely written! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/16/2013 11:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne, I'm on my way home from looking the beautiful sun rise in mount Bromo, I wish I could share my beautiful morning with you :D wishing you a wonderful weekend :D hug, yanny