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My Lemon Stella

She was called, Stella, my little yella lemon! A Chevy Citation,you can only imagine my elation! She started almost ever time I needed her too. As long as the wires were crossed the fire flew! No horn and a rattle in the end. The hood was buckled with a slight bend. You had to turn the car off, to turn her wipers on. The bumper was duck taped and her muffler was wired on, its true! It even quit more than a time or two! She was a stick shift and got rubber in one gear, which made her hard to steer! Drivin’ down the road she would sway to the radio’s greatest hits Getting her grove on until a pot hole punched her dance ticket and there we sit! Not to worry I cleaned her battery cable and post once I got her to coast, the motor finally hit, her rods a knockin’, and we were back on the road listening to our radio and a rockin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/17/2011 6:19:00 PM
This poem is so sweet! I loved it. It reminds me of a truck my friend told me about that doesn't back up. The guy has to push any time he needs to back out of a parking space. :)
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Date: 8/30/2011 8:48:00 AM
me have myself like this one of this fine days.she is so nice.Thanks Lori 4 your comment in my poem.love liz
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:56:00 PM
Wow, some lemon you have Lori! She has a beautiful name...wander how many miles she's a rockin' to!
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:05:00 PM
Sounds like a buggy I could love! The mental picture you give takes the reader on a fantastic fun ride.
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Date: 8/28/2011 8:34:00 PM
Oh and by the way lovely Lady Lori, it went on my favorite poems list....with love.....old Jack
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Date: 8/28/2011 8:33:00 PM
Delightful witty funky write...gave me a smile and brightened my day!!! awesome Lori....with love...old Jack...and oh yes good luck on contest...Yawn.....
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:30:00 AM
haha This is great my friend. Had one like that too once but the worst car we ever had as the one I wrote about. That thing looked good but the motor was ruined. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:52:00 PM
Stella, very clever! Truly enjoyed, have your self a nice one,..p.d.
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