My Legacy

I suppose, in time I may shine. Poetic styling will guide my chosen destiny. Words my legacy. Just trying a new style: Shadoma, six line, 3,5,3,3,7,5 Hope you like it. Judy

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Kim M

Date: 4/17/2010 12:23:00 AM

Cool! I'm impressed with your diversity in trying the new form, and with the fine result you achieved! Nice job! I wonder if you will choose to try more of these shadomas!

John Beam

Date: 3/4/2010 1:17:00 PM

keep smiln while you are styln Jesus loves you

John Beam

Date: 2/20/2010 7:01:00 PM

thnk you for comment have good evening

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/13/2010 9:53:00 AM

You have captured the dream of poets, to have their written words serve as a shining legacy. And I like this new verse form very much. You work very well in it! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2010 7:14:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Judy. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with life and your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol