My Heartbreak

Going  to  take this razor to my wrist to see if I can stop the pain
I’m always in the wrong, the one everybody has to blame
The person that hurt me, is having fun with their life
She cut me into pieces, with her double bladed knife

There is a gaping hole in my heart, one that can’t be filled 
To be honest I’d rather be run over, hit by a truck and killed.
The tears trickle down my face like the rain falls on the earth
You told me that you love me, then that I had no worth

Putting the pieces of my heart together with some tape and glue
The one person I thought I could trust, the one that could pull me through
Just stabbed me in the back without any regret
Even though I loved her since the first time we met

Going to take this razor to my throat to see how much it bleeds
I sit here and wait for the angel that I so desperately need
I really thought I found her, turns out that I was wrong
I am so far into this pit, but  it feels like I belong.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/18/2012 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Brianna. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2012 8:40:00 AM
I really like your last stanza - waiting for the angel, and your ending. I'm in a pit too - maybe we could just share one? Congrats on your poem being featured this week! and welcome to the soup :)
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Brianna Rivera
Date: 5/15/2012 5:31:00 PM
thank you very much :) Yeah my poetry isn't always happy, but it is definetly my way to get my heart ache out
Date: 4/25/2012 2:26:00 PM
Brianna, welcome to P-Soup - hope you will write, read and comments alot of poem here. - You have a touching poem today. - Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/25/2012 2:54:00 PM
thank you i will :)
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