My Heartbeat

1 Do I ever Think
   That  I will never Find LOVE
   I have Barbara

2  Do I ever "DREAM"
    That I will never Find LOVE
     I have Barbara

3  Imagination
    That I will Find True LOVE
    I LOVE Barbara

Inspired by and Dedicated to my HEARTBEAT -- Barbara Jean Gorlick

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/13/2010 2:21:00 PM

Thank you, HG, for sharing this poem. It makes me think about love. It's nice to love and be loved. For love is no game...and true love gives the heart wholly. Love is not to be taken for grant-it. But instead to be cherished, nurtured, and reciprocated. Otherwise, it is just a dream that can fly away in a moment. Reality is so much better than dreams. True love takes everlasting giving 100%, sharing, etc. Don't you think? Thank you for your comments on my poetry. Smiles, Dane Ann

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2010 8:22:00 PM

And I am sure BG luvs u too HG .. a wonderful write to a wonderful lady and poetess... BUT... u are still my silent beau from your forever "Sweetheart"... I think there is some difference between LOVE and "Sweetheart"... "its all good"...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/5/2010 11:47:00 PM

How sweet and loving,,How beautiful and what a special woman you chose to love,,Charma

James Fraser

Date: 3/5/2010 6:48:00 PM

Lovely write HG, u r just so lovely in these warm pieces, but i do have to say that i thank you ever so much for your ever kind words. It does look like i will be a stranger from the soup from the end of this month, infinitive >> its been lovely >> all the very best >> Chowa .... from the Highlander >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2010 5:50:00 PM

Wonderful love and tribute to Barbara. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/5/2010 5:25:00 PM

awwwwwww how wonderful! Light & Love

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/4/2010 5:09:00 PM

Congratulations to you both . Nice triple Senryu, HG and certainly from the heart.-Robert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2010 3:27:00 AM

Beautiful dedication HG my forever friend. I think Barbara will be very happy when she sees this. Excellent Senryu written straight from the heart. Love, Carol

June Ellen Smith

Date: 3/3/2010 9:19:00 PM

What a nice tribute. You have such love in your heart, showing through your poetry. Thanks for the comments today. Always, Ellen