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My Halloween Demise

When I finally met St Peter at the Gate He politely asked me if I would wait.. He thought he should ask God If he should let in this old broad.. Normally I would never have passed, But my devil costume was such a blast..... For Tony's contest..

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Date: 10/24/2010 10:08:00 PM
PS. Yea, that Ricky Adams doesn't know what he missed out on. I bet he married a shrew. ahhaha.
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Date: 10/24/2010 10:07:00 PM
Ah, this is cute, Barbara!! What a unique way to enter the contest. Is it for that heaven contest. That one has me stumped!(I said that about the tree stump contest too. haha, and I finally did one anyway) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:20:00 PM
funny... glad God has a sense of humor!!
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Date: 10/23/2010 3:07:00 PM
I love this humourous Rhyme, Barbara. I know it will be one of the winners! Hope all is well.. Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/23/2010 2:39:00 PM
Very humorous write for the contest. Good luck, barbara. Nice title
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Date: 10/23/2010 12:15:00 PM
love it, just love it, good luck in the contest, mine involves a devil costume too, but its terribly long winded I think
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Date: 10/23/2010 11:56:00 AM
This really made me laugh....not a chuckle...or a gaff...but a really nice belly laugh....Thanks....Randall
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Date: 10/23/2010 11:56:00 AM
Ha ha, I'm now picturing you in a nifty little devil costume Barbara. Nice one and good luck in Tony's contest >> James
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