My Girlfriend

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I love her redolent hair, resonating a pure,
A pure of meticulous style.
And her darkened red lips, reliable red lips,
With a trenchant séduisant smile.

She makes me nefarious, serene filled with guilt, 
Wicked like an arch full of sin.
She’s my amatory woman, filled with a love, 
A love that eats under my skin.

And I reach out to her, holding my heart in my hand, 
Held like a glass full of wine.
This fervour is yours my love for you,
This is all that I had that was mine.



Amatory: sexual
Fervour: intense and passionate feeling 
Nefarious: wicked
Redolent: evocative
Séduisant: seductive
Trenchant: penetrating

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