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My First Love

when i first laid my eyes upon you, you looked so tender and fair with those deep amber eyes and soft brown hair you looked like the queen of the nile and when u spoke the angels sang and i knew that i would love you until the earth no longer span with legs so long and skin so soft and when we kissed my heart was lost and in every place i have ever been no one even comes close to you my queen so now i have said my piece and im so glad your happy glad your soul is so free my love for u will always be ce la vie

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Date: 7/23/2009 1:24:00 PM
Congrats Cameron on your lyric being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. Ernilando
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Date: 7/20/2009 9:02:00 AM
this is an awesome creation! congrats on being featured!
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Date: 7/20/2009 7:39:00 AM
congrats friend on your well deserved feature of the week, this is such an awesome poem, lovely and... you are such a wonderful poet. keep writing
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Date: 7/20/2009 6:11:00 AM
Cameron,...very sweet poetry ! Congratulations having it featured this week !
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cameron. Love, Carol
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