My First Kiss

It was a sunny and bright Sunday evening
All of us kids were gathered under the cellar
I the mommy and the neighbor’s son the daddy	
We fed the children and sent them off to school

Daddy said “mommy just a kiss and I’m off to work”
I peeped around the column looking for grandma
She was nowhere to be seen so I kissed daddy
Then I sent him on his merry way to work
With his banana leaf lunch bag and clay food

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/30/2012 3:16:00 PM
Aw! Innocent love and our first sweet kiss... I still remember mine! BTW thanks for dropping by and checking out my poems, dear friend! Relatively new here and still finding my way around! Love and big hugs, Jack
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Date: 8/24/2012 10:02:00 PM
That's so special 'touching, beautiful relationship is the dream of all dreams thank you for sharing
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Date: 8/22/2012 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful rendition of a child's game. So manyof us used to play 'house.'
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Date: 8/22/2012 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Joy. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2012 6:14:00 AM
Now the secret's out. Congratulations, Joy.
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:41:00 AM
congrats Joy on a super win for this phenomenal poem on first kiss.. lovely lines .. I so enjoyed.. thankxx for prayers for my many health ussues.. I feel them luv..
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Date: 8/22/2012 3:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joy xx
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Date: 8/21/2012 11:31:00 PM
This was a very cute description of your first kiss. Very sweet.
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Date: 8/20/2012 11:54:00 PM
Lol..excellent..at someone remembers their first kiss!!! Good luck in the contest!! :)
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