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My First Heartbeat

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My First Heartbeat


H ow can you doubt what you are to me 

A ll what I dream and do is for you 

L ittle I show, but, for you, I fight

A nd never doubt: you're my first heartbeat...


(to my first-born child, who is a beautiful young lady now and mommy's hero... Thank you
for being patient.. I promise I will spend less time at work :)

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  1. Date: 12/13/2010 10:02:00 AM
    i love it... this brought tears to my eyes its amazing love you both and miss u lotz!

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 5:50:00 AM
    A beautiful, tender piece =) Allah y7meeha ya rab. How have you been doing? It has been so long indeed. I truly hope I hear from you. Farah

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 4:13:00 AM
    I can not tell you what it meant to me to be able to read your poetry today Dima. I wish you the best in your writing and hope each day takes you to greater heights in it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 1:59:00 PM
    Heartbeat of america---just teasing, enjoyed reading your works today. Hope you have a good evening with your heartbeat today.

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 12:00:00 PM
    Hala is my daughter's name :D it means hello or welcome (in arabic)

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 11:49:00 AM
    what does HALA spell? john

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 11:39:00 AM
    Very beautiful !!!!I enjoyed~makes me think of and cherish my daughter~~~Thank you ~Rick~~"your my first heartbeat"So very nice