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My Final Goodbye

My Guardian Angel, If I could get a warning, Before God came to take me to Heven, I would wake in the morning Right about seven; Get down on my knees to pray And then I would wake you. Knowing that this is my last day, I realize what I've always wanted to do. Looking into your eyes, With my head on your chest; I have never been good at goodbyes, But I let you know that I feel truly blessed; I have cherished these years. Before I fade away into the sky, I will wipe your tears And tell you "bye-bye". For the contest If I had One Last Day to Live Sponsor, Walayee Whitlock January, 2011

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Date: 3/14/2016 12:46:00 PM
kaci jo atteberry, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:45:00 PM
Kaci, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/12/2011 1:37:00 AM
excellent write, Kaci! I enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Kaci. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations on winning, Kaci Jo.
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:33:00 AM
Awesome job Kaci good to see your most worthy poem in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your poem's honored 15th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:56:00 AM
Thank you all :) I feel so honored to have such talented poets reading my poetry.. :)
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of walayee, kaci
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:56:00 PM
Congrats Kaci Jo on your winning poem in Lay's contest.. enjoy with luv...
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Date: 2/8/2011 5:11:00 AM
sad by definition of the contest, but nicely handled, I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:56:00 PM
A very good entry for Walayee's contest. You have both great descriptiveness and rhyming in this submission.
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Date: 2/1/2011 8:35:00 PM
a beautiful entry for the contest, most enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/24/2011 12:54:00 PM
Please let me know if this is a new form of Chant Royal.
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Date: 1/24/2011 5:13:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. hope u have entered this in the contest posted.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 1/24/2011 3:40:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kaci. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol
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