My Favorite Tree

(The Tree form) 



My 
Nice tree 
Beautified 
Decorated house 
It was a nice tree 
It gaves us lots of shade 
Not big but in eyes perfect 
It's red blossoms I did treasure 
M 
Y
Nice tree 



Tree 
Loved it 
Was good tree 
Truly got hurt 
Protected many years 
Then I have to let go 
Sorry can save it no anymore 
I'm so heartbroken now it's gone 
T 
R
E
E
Love it 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2009 



September 20,2001 


Author's Note: 

"The Tree" poetry form, is a 
new poetry style created by 
Dorian Petersen Potter,today, 
September 20,2009. 



Authors Note: "The Tree" poetry form, is a new poetry 
form created by Dorian Petersen Potter,today, 
September 20,2009. 


The Tree is a poetry form created by Dorian Peterson Potter on September 20th, 2009. 

This form is done as follows: 8 lines beginning with one syllable and ending in 8 syllables 
then this is followed by the first word that begins each staza. This word is written vertically 
by letter then followed by the next one or two words that would appear on line two.It looks
better when it is centered, because then you can see displayed the true beauty of the tree 
shape. Subject is optional and there's no rhyme.There is no stanza limit , you can write one 
or numerious.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/29/2009 7:38:00 AM
Hi Dorian, a very clever poem, I loved it. read my poem The Tree, I am a beginner so let me know your opinion, love Barbara Cameron.
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