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My Fantasy 3

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My Fantasy 3

I plan to end the fantasy mystery in this part
And hopefully end up capturing her heart
I guess I’ve withheld her name for far too long
This unnecessary suspense is just wrong
So finally I made that move that has long eluded me
A smile lit her face -- and it was clear for me to see…
She had been expecting this move for a very long time
But my cowardice had prevented me from singing my favourite rhyme
A rhyme that every woman loved and appreciated
Thank God now am getting slowly acquainted
And who knows she may just be the one I might take to the altar
And then I can reflect and confidently say – I have come really far
Unfortunately I can’t tell you her name
But maybe I will – after her wild beauty I have managed to tame…

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  1. Date: 6/2/2011 2:52:00 AM
    Beautiful Poem.I like it very much. Gidds.

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 2:26:00 PM
    loved this poem well written, put togeter very well, you have to tell us who the girl is. thank you for reading my poem it means so much to me when some one does.

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 11:34:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Felix. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol