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My Eyesight

the sky is gray and gloomy trees stand still, they cannot sway small birds chirp looking for their mum they also long for the brightness of the sun the scenic spots I usually perceive day and night am I now blind that they’re out of my sight the squirrels who give their biggest grin I think they’re all busy looking for the best cuisine looking at the ponds and lake outside they are so stagnant that no one likes to ride a sound of one cuckoo seems has a message to impart does it want to tell me that you’ll finally depart so now, as I lay down on my bed I close my eyes but dread creeps my head I just hope I only have a nightmare that my eyesight is lost or my vision is not clear again, I want to close my eyes for the second time hoping for another dream that tomorrow will be mine a dream full of hope and joys which will forever abide like in the past when you and I stayed together side by side
Jan. 13,2012 (A depression poem) 7th Place Contest: Under the Influence Judged: 3/12/13 Poet Sponsor: Poet Nathan A.

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  1. Date: 3/14/2013 5:31:00 PM
    Congratulations once again Leonora....Donna. :-) :-)

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:41:00 AM
    So glad I saw this this time around Leonora--many congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest :D

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:15:00 PM
    congrats on your win Leonora

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:43:00 PM
    Hi sweet sis... I'm seeing another winning poem from you... many hugs to you and your awesome poem... xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:01:00 AM
    hi hi hi my sweet beautiful i miss you so very much...thank you dear for stopping by ..i love this poem so much.. very beautifully written like the writer :) and about my poems.. i just think to begin with a new page.. and appreciate so much your supports and courages <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:58:00 PM
    Wow, this is absolutey amazing. You really are quite a talented poet, my friend! Very well penned. :)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 1:44:00 PM
    We all can hope for it is a free commodity..Enjoyed reading this very expressive and emotive work..Thanks for stopping by...I hope that this day has been good for you..Sara

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:00:00 PM
    Hi again, Leonora!! thinking of you.

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:35:00 PM
    back to this beauty!! and it was lovely seeing you here today, Leonora!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Really enjoyed reading this one my dear Leonora! Nicely written... love and hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 10:15:00 AM
    i for one suffered all of what you write here,, thank goodness for medication.. love your poem,, it brings to life reality

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 4:19:00 PM
    Hi Leo,,, my sweet and favorite all time soup poet... I love this poem from beginning to end this poem does all the little things right. the flow is excellent and the imagery is consistent and imposing. you have so easily passed on what you see to the reader this is a most excellent poem that shows off your deep talents. I am happy I got to read this one again.. This time making my comment from my computer. by the the lovely light your eyes expose when in or out of a dream.... always & forever...LINDA

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 6:59:00 AM
    Hi Leo my friend. I hope this is only nightmares and not really happening, that would be too awful to contemplate. An excellent write dear friend but reassurance needed xx

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 8:10:00 PM
    Really deep and I enjoyed this so much Leo, gloomy poe but wonderful verses, you are really a wonderful person :) - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:36:00 AM
    How the soul longs for the freedom to soar coupled with it's mate, well written Leonora enjoyed your poetry today xxx

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Hello My Dear Leonora, another great poem expressing whats inside your precious heart. I enjoyed reading it today before I sleep. Have a blessed day always!!hugs and kisses for me to you :)

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:57:00 PM
    very pretty one, Leonora, and it has a sense of bittersweetness. CAn't believe i had not seen this yet. glad to finally see it. Luv ya, andrea

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:08:00 PM
    wicked write simler to a coupl of mine in pattern style how are you ok xxx davidscott

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Hi..Leo... hope you got my mail.... and read my latest blog.. Missing you on the soup. I was feeling gloomy yesterday, but today has been a good day. about your poem: the way you pressed the image in my mind is outrageous. I can visualize the gray and gloomy moment, and the way you lead my smile 2 frown for you. wishing you to fall asleep just to dream this dream... always your sis... xox~PD