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My Deathless Love

It has gone on for far too long.
Lightning will smite me for my wrong.
On my honor, I gave all that I could,
Vicious fate will still get me; I knew that it would.
Even now, you gaze at me with shimmering eyes;
Yearning, I hide from those azure skies.
Open arms forced to stay at each side,
Unworthy Casanova, swallow love as pride!

Kindness that I never deserved, shall soon depart-
Run away! Run far from this fool’s heart.
Instead of your man, I could be your brother,
Somehow then fall as dumbly for another
Touch you, I will not; never as I am touched,
Ever in your hand a heart lays unclutched,
Nevermore to care, roaming directionless and hurt.

Only one can tell why  I hold you close to me,
Bringer of my sorry end, a light I cannot see.
Raging passion held behind exhausted eyes,
In a prison so deep you cannot hear its cries.
Enchanting, your smile makes a pulse stop still.
Not even I could destroy my love, nothing ever will

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  1. Date: 1/5/2010 3:43:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup, Chris! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 8:48:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 3:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Chris. May you have may more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 2:40:00 PM
    Chris, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 8:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Chris. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2008 3:17:00 PM
    OMFG!!!! I love it sooooo much!!!!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 10:18:00 AM
    wow this is an AMAZING poem I love how you express yourself. from Sierra