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My Dear Father

My Dear Father this is not an empty house Though you strive to make it so Grief can tear the ribs from you But your love for her should not let go Put back up the pictures Put your lives back on view 48 years of marriage still survive And Mum is quite mad at you....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/16/2010 1:27:00 PM
Interesting write that has the reader questioning what exactly happened here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/15/2009 6:47:00 AM
wow very good and clear one! Tough compition on this letter contest glad I'm not judging LOL. Light & Love
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Date: 11/15/2009 12:23:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Jo.Rgds Brian
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