My Crutches

By: Ali Taha Alnobani

My crutches:
You shared me all my life
But I didn't
I was a bird
My wings shared the love rhyme 
To take a look before the adventure
To have love forever
***
My desire is wider than the open sea and the sky
 Feathers which grew on my two crutches
Drank the wind like a roaring waterfall
I can understand the madness
I can live in a wild flower
Then fly with the pollen
To taste the remote ports
And breathe like sails
***
The story started in a remote forest 
When a strange man was chopping the wood
 Then a crazy magician puffed on them to be crutches
Till that moment, I had no wings
But the feathers grew from my soul in a very cold night
The fire shaped me to be a love bird 
 Singing once and traveling an other
***
" you are mad" said the trees
My face, my neck, were nervous
And afraid of squeeze
The long days became short
And my desire is as wide as the seas
I couldn't escape
But I knew life more and more
***
Inside me
There is a cave of horror echo 
A voice asked me to try
To go out 
To have a moment with the vast sky
Angels and monsters are living together
An angel upstairs
A monster downstairs
None sees the other
But the bird
Can draw his mad city
Despite the long roads
And the dark cave
***
My crutches
I'm the heart of the earth 
And you are my sail
To draw the life taste
***
And you 
Believe me; start now
There are many things to do
For the sake of love and life
***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/16/2016 11:03:00 PM
that's a great read. Ali, enjoyed the end. LINDA
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:29:00 PM
interesting good write!
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Date: 11/11/2010 5:34:00 AM
great write!
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Date: 11/7/2010 4:05:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight .. hope your time on Soup is special and fun and full of luv..
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Date: 11/6/2010 12:22:00 PM
thank you very much carol, I will do so thanks again Ali
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:24:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ali. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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