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I wonder when it happened, that her hands became my own... as I watch mother's fingers pointing back to my childhood How could I know, to the last small detail, this intimate connection; were it not for blue veins that flow to my heart?
_______________________________ For Nette's Contest: Crown of My Body

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/2/2012 8:51:00 AM
I LOVE this!!!! Looks like you forgot to submit it? What a shame!!
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Date: 6/30/2012 9:19:00 AM
Such a lovely dedication! Your language and layout are so eye-catching!! Best wishes, Keith (PS thanks for your comment!)
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Date: 6/27/2012 1:56:00 PM
carrie, i read ruben's comment on my whitney blog so i browsed through your poems.. this wasn't submitted!... awwwh, it's a winner... let me know... :) huggs!
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:48:00 AM
Sweet remembrance of the childhood. Nicely worded. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/22/2012 8:33:00 AM
Just awesome Carrie!This is amazing!Love it.
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:08:00 PM
This is deep Carrie ! An excellent change from hearing the same ol'...."Chip off the old block" ! *smiles* An enjoyable read tonight dear poet ! have a pleasant week....much love, james
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Date: 6/19/2012 10:01:00 AM
Carrie, this is brilliant, good luck..David
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Date: 6/18/2012 7:09:00 PM
I really like this, Carrie. Great work. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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