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My Cat is Not Stupid

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My Cat is Not Stupid

whiskers twitch
there's a dog in the litter
hello floor

4-7-13

Not sure if it's a senryu or a haiku? Help, please :)

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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:47:00 PM
    OI! I love the haiku... he he he... is she nursing the dog... I'm not sure... lol nor is the cat... he he he..I had puppies who enjoyed my cats company, but the cat felt different... all they wanted was love, not a swop... :-) Linda

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Very funny. You are very prolific. I could only write because I took some time off from the regular routine. So, so long for now to you--a kind and insightful writer. I will visit this space often and take solace and inspiration from your wonderful words.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Haha, love animal-ku :) Cute! Whether it's a haiku or senryu I always just label it haiku for simplicity's sake. But technically haiku has to do with some sorta season... While senryu has the human element involved.

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 12:06:00 PM
    ha ha i so freaking love this ~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 8:29:00 AM
    Senryu....and a good one!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 12:36:00 PM
    im still learning all I know what you write is cool how are you alo0ng time no hear xx davidscott

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 10:05:00 AM
    I would definitely say this is a senryu, since it's funny :) I grew up with a pit bull, but now I have a cat, so I love this!!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 6:22:00 PM
    what a fun one!!!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 5:44:00 PM
    haha i finally got it.