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My Birthday Suit

Birthday comes once in a year It comes every year of your life A reminder of the day you came to be A day you truly know nothing about But a day you are truly celebrated. My birthday comes on the seventeenth I was seventeen on the seventeenth The day was unique because of the numbers Got a unique birthday gift from my Dad My birthday gift a special birthday suit. On my special suit on my special day I looked pleasant and radiant My friends all complimenting my suit As the birthday boy I reveled in encomiums I exude the aura of a royal prince. My friends in their exuberance popped drinks I was bathed in drinks of different tastes My birthday suit did come to ruins My birthday suit just for my birthday Truly a special gift for a special birthday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/18/2014 12:55:00 AM
Sounds like a great birthday, Raymond. I hope your mom made you a cake! Season's greetings, Mikki
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Date: 5/1/2012 12:38:00 PM
Raymond, hope it was a successful birthday for you. Congratulations on arrears! - Well done poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/1/2012 9:28:00 AM
This is a good poem, I hope you had a lot of fun in your birthday suit. Lucilla
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Date: 5/1/2012 9:16:00 AM
Raymond, sounds like a good party though..David
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