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My atomic lover, chemically induces me.
  Transforms me into substances and breaks,
Down, my anatomy.
He starts with my mind, as complex as it may be
  Changes my compound structure, my neurons
      To transmitters, stop functioning naturally
I no longer can process, the capability to reason freely.
  He interrupts my thought pattern, and emotionally challenges me.
  After the mind is stimulated, he advances to my heart
A vital organ, made up of 4 chambers, this is the crucial part
  My heart cannot transfer, what the mind is telling me
               It races out of control, in all urgencies.  

 All my senses then awaken, with one single touch
My vital signs, are compromised, as a passionate persuasion erupts
          My heart skips a beat, at the thought of his loving ways
        So pacient kind, and understanding, never ceases to amaze

An ignition starts, that revives the heart.  I can never give enough praise
          My atomic lover, I will love you till my, departing days.

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  1. Date: 8/30/2013 1:12:00 PM
    The Transformer! Great work, Cherie!

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/30/2013 11:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Appreciate your comment Gerald, many thanks:0) cherie