Music of Poetry

redolent flower brushed in light of white rosebud tears on soft petals with sips of champagne she spoons down the poem in bits and pieces leaving something of herself unfettered between the lines requesting a song blending in with sounds of night sonata drifting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 2/26/2009 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful form and wonderful prose, very vivid. Wonderfully done! And WELCOME to Poetry Soup! ~Trudy~
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Date: 2/22/2009 11:28:00 PM
Michael Jordan:No problem about getting here. I haven't been able to get here either.Thanks for the read and leaving a comment.I enjoyed your poetry as well. aloha,Koko
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Date: 2/22/2009 11:26:00 PM
Raul, thank you for the welcome and for a nice comment left. I enjoyed your poetry also!Koko
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Date: 2/18/2009 9:38:00 AM
Koko I apologize that it has taken so long to reply but I'm very busy these days - I have never seen this form before but like it very much - BTW welcome to the Soup - I really do have to run but I'll be back home in a few hours and I'll have more time to catch up on your poetry - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/15/2009 10:45:00 PM
Beautiful work Koko and welcome to poetry soup. I invite you to read some of my work and I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul
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Date: 2/15/2009 9:11:00 PM
Christie, Thank you for leaving a comment. I appreciate it very much. aloha, Koko
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Date: 2/15/2009 1:31:00 PM
Beautifully written Koko. I guess we all leave something of ourselves in each poem we write.
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Date: 2/15/2009 7:04:00 AM
Dear, Christie, The comment is appreciated and very complimentary coming from such an exquisite poettss as yourself. thanks and aloha, Koko
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