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Mushroom Red Mark* Triple Acrostic*

Marks from the shroom exposed as you Undress, I caress your Silky thigh-way, blessed by the mess you Have made. lay down boo and Rest the night has reached it's crest. Overtime I'll relieve your stress, I'm Obsessed... your life with Me is inevitable, give up on your protests.. Requests will be satisfied, Embraced, we can pass any test Discover this love, I'm undefeated in my conquest... Mellifluous sounds impress, harmonious melody Abstract through cyber chats.. Your Requests assist the prince to show you bliss, come Kiss this man, rub your hands upon his chest. Sample his skin and leave a hickey on his breast... Jared Pickett 5/29/2010 Asavvy1

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/15/2023 1:43:00 PM

"As you undress, I caress your silky thigh-way." This thought alone screams, oh yes ! ! ! You certainly have a way with words. I'm captivated and breathless, all at the same time. :) Brandy

Jared Pickett
Date: 1/15/2023 1:57:00 PM

I knew you'd love this one. Definitely one of my favorites.. Thank you for reading and i absolutely adore your responses.. Much love..

John Monteblanco

Date: 8/6/2010 3:17:00 PM

I LOVE this poem! It fills me with warmth

Constance La France

Date: 8/5/2010 2:42:00 PM

Another brilliant acrostic poem~ you are a master at these ~ thanks for the inspiration~~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 8:27:00 AM

Appreciate the example Mr. J.. will do my "Sweetheart" best..luv.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/1/2010 6:11:00 PM

not me...no blush LOL...haven't seen or thought of a hickey in years LOL...kinda stopped folks from straying! Light & Love (add to my blog please!)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/3/2010 10:59:00 AM

Blushing before I finished...Jared!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2010 2:14:00 PM

very cute, I loved that last stanza. thanks for the HM. I hope to find time for Rondel. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2010 5:11:00 AM

No harm..No foul... it felt so cold on here without your warmth on my reads is all and I was thinking back to see if I had said or done something to chase u from my poetry... did not mean to sound like the tigress that I am..haha... know u are a busy guy and in luv right now ..its OK .. all is well and sorry if I sound like ...rrrrrrrrrr... have been ready to chuck my romance and its affecting everything else.. u know how that can be right? luv ya.. from the "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/1/2010 6:11:00 PM

U mad at me? cause u seem to be commenting on lots of poets but passing me by.. OK what did I do? guess I am being sensitive but I have to know... if I did something wrong tell me so I can apologize and make it right again... freeze out is what men do best.. my Ron uses the same technique... and he is really headed for the PAST barrell very soon...haha..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/1/2010 11:43:00 AM

hot one, Thanks for all your comments!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/1/2010 2:10:00 AM

Obsession and passion.protests and the inevitable.Great work.Jar!

Date: 5/31/2010 6:05:00 PM

Wow, I knew you were a good poet but this is fabulous. You have certainly outdone yourself Mr. JP. It is so passionate and this is a very lucky woman to benefit from all these Mushroom Red Marks! Love Scarlett

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/31/2010 6:02:00 PM

blessed by the mess...you undress I caress. What a nice flow with rhyme and rhythm. Very much enjoyed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2010 12:18:00 PM

Great passionate flavor and taste to this one Jared hon and sounds like u have great subject matter to focus on to write so intensely... I felt every line and every move... enjoyed a creative masterpiece.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"